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Marionette
I was at mercy to his touch
he pulled me this way and such
he became my crutch
I hated that I loved him
*ahem*
liked him this much
he made me blush
in terra cotta, Persian red
I could barely hear the words he said
Instead I play pretend girlfriend
give him all the benefits
and none of the consequence
it makes no sense
but he makes me feel intense
and I dismiss commitment
and opt for temporary insanity
a future calamity
Surely he knows
he is my addiction
and I am a dope fiend
a mere puppet on a string.
written by,
~TD
How many of you are dating someone (or knows someone) that holds all the cards, you aren’t really moving forward yet you can’t let go??
You in fact are the puppet on the string….
I wanna hear from you….
************CHALLLLLLLLLENGGGEEEEEEE!!!************
AS WELL….. MY LAST POEM CHALLENGE ASKED WHAT “LOVE IS”, WELL LETS FLIP IT…. MOST OF US THAT HAVE BEEN IN LOVE HAVE ALSO EXPERIENCED HEARTBREAK…..IN YOUR MOST DESCRIPTIVE WORDS, PLEASE PREPARE AN ORIGINAL POEM / RAP / SONG / SHORT STORY / OR PARAGRAPH THAT DESCRIBES THIS AND WE WILL ALL POST OURS ON THE NEXT BLOG… LETS GET TO WRITING….
~TD
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TD, alls i know is (lol) no one better not try to challenge this poem.. cause this is bomb!!!
(very bad english but its on purpose.. im trying to drive home a point lol) xoxo
lol, I agree with (him/her) ^^^^ no challenge here but I will say no one should ever allow themselves to get so caught up in an individual that they lose sight of themselves. Once someone causes you to act out of character and drives you from your “constant” it’s time to go.
Yes I have had my heartbroken, however the only way one could write about it is if they hold on to the pain or the memory of that moment (which is something I never do). Now when I look back on that situation, I wonder what the hell I saw in ole dude in the first place, while he now holds on to regrets (imagine thattt), so with that being said, I am tapped out for this challenge mama butt truly enjoyed reading “your” words :o)
Love your piece! There are lots of puppetmasters out there. I just wrote one about trying to break free from the strings myself.
I love this poem because I am currently in a situation similar to this : /…In no way Im I trying to challenge your writting : ) however Im new to this and I just wanted to share my piece on my situation…so here it is—>>
Clinging to a love
That we can’t understand
Constantly hoping…
That one day we’ll be more
More than friends
Cause even though I
I sometimes fell like just walking away
You know and I know
That ill turn right back around
If you asked me to stay
Clinging to a love
That I don’t understand
Cause it’s never been like me
To let someone have the upper hand
Yet I cling
Cling to the notion
Of having an open mind and an open heart
Cause only with you
Were they open from the start
I tried to run
But from love I couldn’t hide
Now I struggle everyday
And put my feeling aside
Cause to cling to a love
That clearly doesn’t want to be
Keeps my mind and heart aching
And I just want to be free
**Tell me what you think : )
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